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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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Sta.sh
'cause i really like the pic
i didn't want to do more to destroy it so i left it like that.
Elmo T.I.C. Crew
But yeah, there's major imrovement showing. Difficult word to write, but it's all consistent and major clean. keep it up, yo.
-Elmo
1) it's clean that's ALWAYS good.
2) your letters are getting better.
Things to work on
1) Try to get the width and structure of the letters more equal. You are getting there, but like the x kinda looks like it's goin' off at a funny angle and the middle of the m is kinda off with the rest of the letter.
2) 3D is solid but you gotta get the width of the 3D exactly the same everywhere to make it look realistic. Also use a vanishing point. make a little dot with pencil somewhere on the page and make every line go to it. You can use a ruler if you want. Or just draw the lines in that direction.
You are gettin' better, keep sketchin and don't be afraid to copy people in your blackbook, just dont' post it as your own. You can learn from people. Find some guys with really good solid letters Doze is a perfect example and scrutinize them and figure out what they do to make the letters look the way they do.
Keep it up!
be creative with the fill.. i would say make a gradient or block fills or something so it doesnt look plain.. i dont know.. the 3d needs a little work. but its good.. i see your pieces comming along.. good work.and always here to help..
doze